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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
The feet look a little odd to me but the rest looks awesome :)
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translyania Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
GOTTA GO FAST
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llirbwerdnadivad Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
How would you say it compares to your previous running?
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xeroanims13 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
the hair need works....but i like the movement...its so smoothhhh!!!
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Tsukuart Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Filmographer
this has too many frames for a run, makes it look a bit jittery
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topdogman21 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist
practice makes perfect ^w^
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shlebby Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks good! Your animations are always so smooth. A little advice though from when I was learning about walk/run cycles, make the head bob up and down a little bit, like when they're being supported by a bent knee their head is lower than if they're being supported by a straight leg. Makes the whole thing look more natural :)
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ppleater Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Arm and leg movement is good but the body would never stay level like that, no matter how hard you power walk, the body moves at least a little bit.
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HectorAdame Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The body goes up,down,up,down while running or walking. Try that to see if the cycle looks more normal without loosing much of the flow it has right now.
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FateOmega Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
I really like this run cycle, if I had to make one critique, (mind you I cannot use Flash so super kudos) Is that there is no up/down motion during the running.  Otherwise, the pose and actual anatomy of the run cycle is quite excellent and sooo much better than I could ever hope to do. :D
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G0Mute Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
It looks nice, but shouldn't the upper body move as well?
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Quirk19 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student General Artist
hmmm it looks really good but i think next time have a little bit of bounce-she looks a little bit like she's speedwalking...still good though
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bunnirox413 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
GOTTA GO FAST
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rtil Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
the keys are good, all you need to do now is fix the timing and get the up and down motion going on the body.
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Otter-10 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
It looks nice for cartoons. However, the torso look a bit too stiff
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IsaiahParker Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great!
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hikarushirou Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Gotta go fa-- *shot*
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AnDrew19787 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Is this a teaser for the upcoming Kylee Boom? :3
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CraziAnime Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
Only comments are.. might want to move the body as a whole up and down... gives it more weight and makes the feet look like they are hitting the ground and pushing the girl upwards. Otherwise... nice and smooth animation rough. :]
Just needs a tad bit of polish!~
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farahsabrina Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i love it
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CooperGal24 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's different from your "Where Do They Go?" animation, yet has that slight cartoony feel. ^^
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peridope Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
all i hear is / slap slap slap / 
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